MÅrena Mason,, I hope you are having a groovy day!
My name is Eliza and I’m working as a blog commenter on the Summer Learning Journey this summer. Have you done the Summer Learning Journey before? I’m looking forward to reading your posts and the other bloggers' posts from the Ako Hiko cluster, over the next few weeks! If you want to know more about me, you can check out my blog.
Well done on creating a poster about Lorde - I really like how you’ve used a purple background, it is eye-catching and effective! I also like that you’ve used both pictures and writing - ka pai! Thanks for sharing those facts too - did you know any of those facts about Lorde, before you researched them? Also, did you know that Lorde has a net worth of $12 million dollars!?
Next time you make a poster, it would be good to add a bold title e.g ‘LORDE’, so that the viewer knows exactly who you are talking about when they first look at it, even if they don’t know what Lorde looks like. Also, when you use photos from the internet, make sure you attribute the image - this just means copy the link from where you found the image and put it next to the image on the poster, so we can see exactly where you found it :)
I actually went to the same school as Lorde and we lived on the same street for a little while, she is one year younger than me. She is a really nice person and I remember her always being very talented at school. Do you have a favourite Lorde song?
I hope that you’ll keep blogging with us over the summer! Keep working on the teaser week activities and on the 16th of December you can start the Week 1 activities.
Thank you for blogging and keep up the great mahi! Eliza :)
MÅrena Mason,, I hope you are having a groovy day!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Eliza and I’m working as a blog commenter on the Summer Learning Journey this summer. Have you done the Summer Learning Journey before? I’m looking forward to reading your posts and the other bloggers' posts from the Ako Hiko cluster, over the next few weeks! If you want to know more about me, you can check out my blog.
Well done on creating a poster about Lorde - I really like how you’ve used a purple background, it is eye-catching and effective! I also like that you’ve used both pictures and writing - ka pai! Thanks for sharing those facts too - did you know any of those facts about Lorde, before you researched them? Also, did you know that Lorde has a net worth of $12 million dollars!?
Next time you make a poster, it would be good to add a bold title e.g ‘LORDE’, so that the viewer knows exactly who you are talking about when they first look at it, even if they don’t know what Lorde looks like. Also, when you use photos from the internet, make sure you attribute the image - this just means copy the link from where you found the image and put it next to the image on the poster, so we can see exactly where you found it :)
I actually went to the same school as Lorde and we lived on the same street for a little while, she is one year younger than me. She is a really nice person and I remember her always being very talented at school. Do you have a favourite Lorde song?
I hope that you’ll keep blogging with us over the summer! Keep working on the teaser week activities and on the 16th of December you can start the Week 1 activities.
Thank you for blogging and keep up the great mahi!
Eliza :)