Gazing up at a gigantic mountain I am scared out of my wits. I am ready to scale this gigantic mountain. I can hear the strong wind blowing on me. I can feel the strong wind blowing on my pants and jacket. I feel like I will regret this.
I have just started climbing and people are already complaining that their legs hurt. But my legs are fine I am going to get to the top. I am ahead of every one not that it is a race but I do want to be the first person to mount this mountain. My legs are burning I think I am going to have to put up a tent here. I am gobbling my food up it feels so good to eat again.
I am half way up the mountain. I feel like every step is like I am getting stabbed in my legs.
'OMG! Someone just fell off the mountain'. I want to quit but I am never going to give up. I am not giving up. I look down and think 'I am not going down that looks scary'. Well, I am doomed. But my partner is saying "don't give up lets get to the top of that together".
I am struggling I am going to put my camp here. I LOVE FOOD. GIVE ME FOOD! I think I had too much to eat I feel like I am going to die. Sleep time. Bye bye Tenzing. I'm excited. I've so much energy. Let's go now. I have so much energy.
We are so close I see the top. Wait, wait I need to pee. Ok done. I am climbing and climbing. I will not stop. I am at the top! I made it!
Hi Mason its Felix and I really like your story about you climbing Mount Everest. What is the biggest mountain you climbed? Next time try adding more talking.
ReplyDeleteBlog ya later, Felix
Hello Felix. I The biggest mountain I have climbed is a mountain at mountain climbing. Thanks for the feed back.
DeleteBlog ya later
(Mason)