Being so high feels so cool. It feels like nothing. I feel nothing.
I hear the wind blowing everywhere. I can see so many clouds.
I am getting closer and closer to the landing zone. As I glide closer to
the ground I hope that I am not going to die. The fear of failure takes
over me. Now is the moment of truth. The ground is near. I fail the
landing and find myself face planted on the ground with a mouth full
of dirt. I am never skydiving again.
Hi Mason I like your story, but it is 91 words instead of 100 words
ReplyDeletehello mason it's Vinnie this is a really good story but Olly is right it is only 91 words instead of 100 🐢🐢🐢
ReplyDeletehi mason James here from room 22. i like your blog post try to fix the bit🙌🙌🙌
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Mason It's Zoe from room 24. I like your blog post on the one hundred word challenge. My favorite part is the picture. In your spear time please make the words smaller because I can't see all the writing.If you like check out my blog at http://odszoec.blogspot.co.nz thank you for sharing your learning Blog Ya Later Zoe
ReplyDeleteHello Zoe. Thanks for you comment. A challenge that I faced was that I did not know how do start the story.
DeleteHave you done one of these before?
Blog ya later,
(Mason)